Hi Izayah, i really like how you have showed us pictures during your time at camp, something that you could improve on is to check if you have capital letters for titles and also to add more information on what you were doing and what you have experience. Great Work!!
Hi Izayah, i really like how you have showed us pictures during your time at camp, something that you could improve on is to check if you have capital letters for titles and also to add more information on what you were doing and what you have experience. Great Work!!
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